Played through it again.
No bug when flashing the man at the front of the bar this time, so that's good!
Dialogue feels like it could use a bit of work, and the grammar DEFINITELY needs work, but I believe you said you were working with someone on that?
For the gameplay, do you intend to have multiple party members? I feel like RPGMaker games work best when that's the case, in terms of interesting fights.