I'm moved, that was really beautiful and the visual simplicity worked so well with your idea. I feel the basic premise of the game was only mildly related to the game jam's theme, but you did manage to incorporate it more through design choices. My only criticism is that like DimsdaleDimadome said some of the mini games snapped me out of the flow a little bit. But great job. The ending was the icing on the cake, glory to collaboration!!
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Thank you so much ! I answered DimsdaleDimadome about the minigames, but I will add that the games were originally so much longer, when I playtested it I realized how much of a pain they are and made them shorter. But yeah the real problem wasn't only their duration but how they fit within the narration.