For novice, this is acceptable. But it is very difficult to figure out how to play this and the UI scaling breaks on larger screens. Also the intro cutscene (if there actually is one and it's not just sound) did not play for me. Overall an ok novice entry, but you definitely need to practice before your next jam. (And do keep jamming, you'll only improve and the idea for this game wasn't even bad)
I would love for you to rate my game too btw :D