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Played the Demo. Excellent work.

This has excellent presentation; also the audio adds so much~♡. I really can see the passion put into creating this world.

Now I do wanna let you know the demo has a few minor grammatical errors. For example, you may want to update a few instances of “I imagined it” to instead read “I thought so.” Also, some pronouns are not tracked correctly. Having chosen female, when eaten by Rem, a number of the later lines use “him” and “he.” Most are correctly represented, though.

This is a splendid digital picture book.

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Hi ^^ Thank you so much for your comment, I really appreciate it, regarding the grammatical errors you mentioned, thank you for pointing them out, I've just changed the "I thought so" part, and the issues with "him" in the girl version have also been fixed. It will be working correctly in version 1.1. I'm so glad you liked the demo ^^