Honestly, Interesting. I few things:
I think the premise is brilliant, however the execution was ok. It is extremely short, with no in-game explanation. I think the idea of a simple game for your first project is reasonable, and I think you made it quite polished! I would say that you could be a great indie dev with your storytelling, but perhaps a few more levels could be interesting. Also, try not to call the player a loser. Like, why??? All in all, I like it, and Happy New Years!!!
7/10 would recommend