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Congratulations to the pictures! I like the style and the details. The text however, in big, all-caps letters, is difficult to read. This is the text style of TOS and an EULA, when the author doesn't want the text to be read. In Sourcebooks I know, the text is printed in two columns and rarely all-caps.

You make only hints at the stats so they can be used for any system. This is flexible.

So the content itself is good but the print is a nightmare for gamemasters who want to look up a bio detail fast.

Thank you for looking at my submission, for the praise and the very fair criticism.

I am glad you've pointed this out about the all caps. It was a somewhat spontaneous decision and I'm not sure if it was out of insecurity regarding my writing ability, some kind of self-sabotage or just plain OBNOXIOUSNESS ON MY PART.

I will take more care with the formatting going forward.