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A great idea with a nicely polished look and feel. It just needed clearer instructions. "Redact all names, numbers and dates" should be stated very plainly somewhere, rather than phrasing it as "certain names, dates, " etc.  

It also wasn't clear that clicking on some words would give me the option to replace them. 

  • You might consider some sort of visual highlight or dropdown interface on words that are replaceable on the page, with a few red herrings (words that are replaceable but should be left alone) sprinkled in so it's not too easy. 
  • The option to unredact something would be good for players who accidentally redact a word when they actually thought they were going to replace. I was kind of scared to click on words I wanted to replace, in case it would permanently redact them. 
    • Maybe replacing a word should be done with a different control than redacting, e.g. a right click instead of left, making it harmless if players right click a word and nothing happens.  

Really love the concept and would be cool to see it expanded! 

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Thanks! Yeah, the game has potential to be better, I'm working on some improvements and going to upload them when voting ends,