This is my review after playing a little : The lack of punctuation irritates me. Some characters sprites have bad anatomy, and I cannot tell if it is an art style or not (it’s inconsistent). I enjoy the backgrounds. The story is sometimes cliché but that is enjoyable, it was expected. I have a hard time grasping the MC personality, but that might be a me problem. I’d suggest making an original OC maybe as I feel like they don’t have a neutral personality. Also, they’re an adult? I assume so (as the game is 18+), but the multiple mentions of ‘‘taking care the shop for a few days’’ feel like it’s their first time when that type of job is very high school/student like.
Overall, this was a very enjoyable game, I can feel that it was made by a fellow visual novel lover and that warms my heart! Everyone should give it a go.
