I liked the art style and the movement. Being sent back for the beginning of the game was frustrating, maybe add more checkpoints will improve the experience. I was not able to play too much of it because the this green color was making my eyes hurt, so reduce the bright will improve it. Also i felt very hard to read the texts while walking, so maybe reducing the amount of text and slowing it a little will improve this aspect.
I also would be very happy if you can rate my game too, i am looking for more ratings before the JAM ends.