Very nice idea! I liked your writing and narration, although it takes a while for the game to actually start. Reading scrolls to change the gameplay was a fun concept. Doing some graphics and sound improvements and reducing the amount of text in the beggining of the game will improve a lot the experience!
I also would be very happy if you can rate my game too, i am looking for more ratings before the JAM ends.
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I had a rather stressful past 2 weeks as it happened, which was very unfortunate timing considering I had really wanted to rate games in the jam… I still have to actually go through my feed before I even can rate games of choice…
But, uh, I was hoping to address that later today, so… hopefully I can manage that later today! Apologies for the delay on things, I would’ve rather it been different from that but at least I can hopefully have time to address it today somewhat.
(As some important context, stress actually can cause me notable health issues, so sorting out my health on that was kind of important before I even considered it in the interest of not being overly harsh on games from being in a bad mood caused by all that. It just… took a lot longer to figure out a good solution than I would’ve liked. Was really hoping to have more time to rate games, but it is what it is, I should still have time to rate yours after rating a few on the feed at least…)
Oh right, and thanks for playing! Admittedly, I did already try to trim down the amount of early game text to begin with to just what I consider necessary for the story, but there might be a few parts that could still be trimmed slightly. Something I can consider if I have time to work on the game more after the jam.