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HELLO!

I liked the idea of the bell turning the walls around and the cute star greeting us at the beginning :)

I would like to say that the game could still be polished up a bit—the wall textures sometimes overlap slightly (which is just me nitpicking, it doesn't really affect the gameplay), the fog, and something like a slight fade-in when we start the game—perfect!
very great for first jam!! 

I remember my first jam... it was awful, your work for your first jam is incredibly impressive and that's really cool, a good start.

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Thanks a lot for the feedback

We completely agree, next jams we’ll definitely save more time for testing and polishing. We fixed many of the wall issues, but there’s still room to improve.

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But don't think that this post is harshly criticizing your work—I think that for a week and for beginners (even for me, with 3yrs of development), it's a lot of work. It's just that English isn't my primary language, and my message may have seemed rude even though it wasn't meant to be :3

I would be grateful if you would also rate my game, if you haven't already!

Don’t worry at all! We genuinely appreciate the feedback this is one of the things we liked the most about the gamejam, getting players to experience the game and give feedback

We didn’t take it as harsh criticism. And no worries about the language we completly understood your reply 

We’ll be happy to check out and rate your game too!