I like the prologue for this very much! There was a...pervasive sort of sense of unease, perhaps because I am used to having more options to choose what my character says. I think I was really expecting her to start LEAVING her foot in her mouth, with some of the things she might say if she was too startled/worried/afraid. I really like Selene, and I REALLY hope she is safe and happy as the story progresses. I want to give her EXTRA plot armor to keep her that way! I also can't wait to see this updated. = )