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We rated this as a team and forgot to leave a comment so I'll do my best with feedback. 

The art style was really nice looking and the characters were well thought out. The dialogue was good and each character had a distinct personality even though they were 'anonymous'.  I do wish it could be sped up /skipped because we had to restart a couple of times due to confusion (see below)

It wasn't entirely clear what we should be doing. After the dialogue we 'thought of our next line' but after clicking the line, nothing seemed to happen and clicking 'e' seemed to do nothing more. On the second try after restarting we were able to think on lines multiple times but  did this during the dialogue and Im not sure if that caused a glitch or something but after a few lines 'e' didn't prompt anything else and nothing was happening on stage.

I loved the fact you could go on a podium and the light would come on it was a nice touch and worked well and the animation was smooth. Music was really nice and UI was clear and crisp.

The character was able to go off stage into the 'background' we were not sure if this was intentional or not but thought it best to point out in case it needed fixing.

I understand this could be our own ignorance and we could have missed something (very likely lol) but we appreciated that the game fit the theme really well and incorporated bonus themes too! 

I'm sorry we couldn't progress further and will give it another go if it was just us being dumb and will update the feedback and give another rating. Thanks for uploading and I hope this feedback is useful to you :)

Oh no this is great feedback. No ones stupid and I think you did your best to play it with the limited knowledge I gave.

The background thing was NOT intentional and I just forgot to fix it (oops).

Thank you for the compliments on the art and dialogue I thought my team did an amazing job at stylizing it.

The game came with a ‘script’ file. and that was meant to be your guide to follow. Pressing E when your line comes up in the script will insert it and speak it.

This is not said anywhere and your confusion is super justified. I plan on making it more clear that you have a line to say in the future of the game.

There’s no real fail state and it’s just really a test on if the system of thinking a line and then later saying it is fun. I’m seeing that to properly test it I need to make it more clear to the players what is happening which is entirely on me.

LOVE the feedback thank you. I’ll put these on the list of things to fix and tweak!