I loved this!! The art is so good, their expressions are so sexy and fun and there is like a frenetic energy to the panels and shots that really made it all feel so alive and exciting! The premise is so hot too, the girl bullying Doll wowowow what a fantasy! I also really like the final speech bubble falling off the page, so adorable!
Reading your thoughts in the extras was also really fun and insightful, I think you absolutely nailed your goal of having something sexy on each page too.