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Hi ! thank you very much or this feedback, greatly appreciated :D

At some point, I had some thoughts about why the Eye would know the king, and why would they even care but as it is the first i'm making such kind of game, my first objective was to try to come up with the different story branches. I kinda struggled to merge all the different ideas I had, so it unfortunately ended up not being completed ^^'

I'm taking notes of your suggestions, I hope i'll manage to come up with something that will make the overall story a bit more believable ! 

And to try to answer to "what is the Eye's state? How does it know the king ? Why does it care ?" I tried to make it suggested by the wizard when he says "I gave you basic knowledge", implying that it it in-univers knowledge, but I understand it's a bit lazy, and I really should think it through a lot more.

Also, really I appreciate that you say the (not so) available dialogue options make sense, that was one of my fear "Are these answers believable ?" so it's reeally reassuring to read that ! Thanks a lot again !