I really appreciate the frankness here, genuinely - I'm gonna keep the distribution of checkpoints in mind for the future (as well as maybe the entire system of losing health when you fall in the water, lmao) and I'm already reworking the feel of Landing a jump, which seems to be a big stickler. Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed the style of it - hopefully after some revisions it can be substance AND style both for you :>