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Hello and thank you very much for your feedback!

It's not generated but I can see what you mean by it being kinda clunky and it bothers me too lol. I've only written technical research papers in my life so that may have been a factor.  this project was also the first time I've really attempted to write a narrative in a time limit  so when i wrote the dialogues I jumped around from one section to another--adding to the choppiness. "It's just coolant" line comes from the fact tech hears dripping so out of fear theyre trying to rationalize it to being a liquid a machine could produce. the first version of this scene had dripping audio in the background but was removed because I couldn't figure out how to make the audio stop if you left the room immediately xd

I didn't really expect a lot of people to play so I didn't pay much attention to writing, I just wanted to practice coding and this game was just the byproduct. apologies for the choppiness!!!