A really cute little story. Both characters are engaging, notably our unnamed protagonist who has an impeccable sense of humor. The writing is good. It knows what it sets out to do and does it really well. Not spectacular, but good.
What is spectacular, though, is the visual presentation. It starts with some nice ui and backgrounds and a cool sprite until suddenly, bam, animations! And there are lots of little and big animations throughout the VN. It’s really impressive and very charming. The audio is nothing special, but works well.
Overall, a cool story with stellar visuals. Great job!