Ok so i got it and man am i dissapointed, why did Syko recommend this? It's absolutly not worth the time, 4 chapters of Prologue and then when it's about to start it ends? Really?
Why the patch? Other BETTER VN or games with more content don't need a patch, especially when there is just 1 scene. But a quest for the dog no one cares about GREAT!!!
You schould have been more inspired by Trouble in Paradise then the trash story simulator Lessons in Love.
Are you a girl? That would make sense!
Alright so much to answer to that message. I don't want to waste too much energy on this but the thing you said about why Syko is recommending Dreamland Wanderer hurts a bit so I'll try to get back to you as best as possible.
- 4 chapters of prologue : ok if you say so. Yet the story is planned to last for around 20 chapters so that would make a prologue of about 25% of the story. I'm not a professional writer but even I know that's not a good thing to do. So no, prologue is chapter 1, period.
- By patch I think you mean the unofficial patch. Well to answer why such a thing exists I think you'd better ask the old folks at Visa or Mastercard etc. Besides, DW isn't a porn game by essence. The nsfw part is only the way I choose to use to adress some potential players. You know "Come for the girls, stay for the plot". If that doesn't work for you I'm sorry, I've missed my point.
- The special Cain version: that's just a bonus version that I wanted to make. Good thing DW is my game and my story so I can do whatever I want with it. I guess the problem here is more about me making something canon but not directly a continuation of the story while I don't have time to keep working on it for the past year. If that's the case, once more, I apologize. Yet, as I said a lot of times : DW is just a hobby. That's not my job and neither a way to make money. So I work on it when I 1/have the time to do so, 2/ feel like it. And guess what, I had my first child precisely 3 years and a half ago while I changed job at the same time to become freelancer. I'll let you guess why one of the 2 conditions above isn't frequently fulfilled...
- About LIL and TIP : I chose my own inspiration but thanks for the recommendation. To me, both TIP and LIL are part of what made DW a real thing and not only some notes on a lonely sheet of paper. You're here on the DW itch page and not the LIL one so, I you have something to say about that last one, I guess it would be better to keep it to yourself or write it to the relevant page.
- Lastly : no, I am a man but I don't see why it would be relevant to any of you points here...I hope you're not implying why I think you're implying tho...
Anyway, thanks for giving a try to my game. It's a shame that it wasn't to your taste but I'm'still glad you took some time to finish all current content and to give me some feedback. These are always precious even when it's not positive.
See ya.
Shli
Okey, so I thought DW would be a porn game because I found it on porn game sites and it was recommended in one, but that was my bad.
I don't know what you mean, but i mean for other porn games or VNs I don't need an patch for it to be "unofficial".
Yeah it's your story and you can do what you want, but i just care about the girls and their storys. And I don't thinks it ok to bait or scam people with tits and a bit sex for the story, that would just reveal that the story isn't good enough.
So I just like TIP because it's straight forward and great, the story is looong but good, but i don't like LIL and DW becuase of the meaningless stat training. Doing the same thing over and over again for stats doesn't make any sense and breaks the flow.
My indication was that girls are more the story type than we men, but apparently not.
So DW will continue? Then I hope it becomes better and not too much story, instead more fucking. On the other hand you could have just made a book or comic. But i'm a perv i guess.
Sorry for the missunderstanding and my maybe too harsh opinion.
Pr1m2s
