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Thank you for all your hard work! By the way, I found these mistypes:
chapter 2: you finally notice the poodle of water (puddle)
Talking with Jewel: You have've much time (haven't)
Showering: You sight, making use of (sigh?)
Suddenly, he newspaper is out (the)
In the club: you push yourselves to your feet (yourself)