I really enjoyed the changes to the beginning that you made from the first submission. The way the light talks to you in the beginning is more immersive and grounded me in the space. I would have liked to have seen something else to represent the light until it reveals it's true form to you. I think the reveal would have been more impactful if we thought it was something else and then, BAM, "Here is my true form." ( Love all the text color btw. )