Viability: The game is playable through many stages until the errors mentioned. I do think the playable elements so far work together and the death screen works too! But I think something is wrong with the overlay on it.
Presentation: The rules are understandable! I could read the menu but it was a bit small and did not scale with fullscreen. Might be a setting in the inspector you have to adjust for that. I understand the movement and sprites are still very WIP, but I think adjusting the player movement to be a bit easier to control will go a long way.
Theme: The theme is so good! Such a creative concept with nice pixel art to go with it. Y'all nailed this.
Engagement: The game is very creative and I would love to see how you two continue to expand on this! I can also really appreciate the little extra details such as the animations!
Overall, I really like what you have so far! I also understand its very WIP and there's errors that can't be predicted.
- Luke