This was honestly quite a fun read. The dialogue was fast, natural, and cryptic (for an unc like myself 😔). Music, font, and art were all tastefully selected/created. Only issue really is that the plot didn't really go anywhere. Maybe the other 2/3rds will complete it, but as it stands, it reads more like a vlog than a crafted story. But overall, well done, especially for a 1-person team.