The voice-over is quite quiet, but the subtitles help a lot. The line delivery when you hit the target with the ball came across as anticlimactic. Might benefit from a bit more energy. I enjoyed the core puzzle, but I wish a few elements were more fleshed out—particularly the overall visual presentation. The lack of textures in the scene was the most noticeable issue.
Adding more assets to the environment and composing them in creative ways could make the room feel more dynamic and introduce greater challenge for the player. Well done Tem and company.