First things first: thank you. Man, I love the communities built around the games. Also, I love all the stuff that Richard Woolcock does, starting from his massive effort in the Savage Worlds community back in the day. He was like a virtual brother, in those far away days.
Now, about the file. If you accept feedback, I'm here for some typo:
- in the first tables, the titles are TALENTO and EFFETTO 🇮🇹💜
- one of the talents is called CopycaPt
- Infamous: reeeealLy
- Chaos Inoculation: a. (remove the dot)
-Several commas have extra spaces before them; some sentences in the table are missing the final period "."
- pag. 11: "the PC can one of the companion’s Perks" I suppose "use" or similar verb is missing.
- pag. 13: "Pick a Perk representing a limit or other form of weirdness" is that a Quirk, maybe?
- No comments about the general text or the choice of words. I know this is a work of love; there's no need to chase perfection.