This has become one of my favorite stories ever. Characters are extremely well done, artwork is both pretty and impactful, music is nice, just a very well done game.
With that said, I do have one minor comment/suggestion (with as few details as possible to avoid any spoiling):
There’s a beat right towards the end of Lyriel’s story that feels like there should be an additional dialog option. Cait’s is in a hurry to talk in the morning and comes out not fully dressed. And the options for that spot are telling her it’s inappropriate or being a bit of a lech, neither of which make her look very happy. It really feels like there should be a non-judgemental ‘good morning’ option there; I was rather surprised to only see the 2 options since there’s almost always 3.
It is probably trivial, but given how natural most all of the dialog feels, it stood out more than it otherwise might. Anyways, the game is genuinely wonderful and I very much look forward to seeing more of it. Thanks very much.