The story and characters are fine, but it didn’t really capture me. I feel it doesn’t work quite well for a short story: I didn’t feel attached to the characters in any meaningful ways so I kinda blew past.
The sprites are nice, it’s a bit weird when we see Bernard without his legs that one time… The CG is cool too, most backgrounds as well. Felipe’s room is too hard to make sense of, though. The music works nicely.
Overall, it’s a nice VN, but it didn’t really interest me. Still, good job!