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The adjusting viewport and NVL(?) mode were very well done! Very interesting method of moving the text and shifting the viewer's focus instead of manipulating the sprites. The dialogue also felt quite satisfying, like I would not have guessed what they were going to say/do.

That said, I do think the pacing was a bit too uniform/nonstop. There was no time to breath, and we were whisked from one line after another. Also, it was an interesting plot, but I kinda didn't see a point to the story other than it being a meme? Maybe the conversation with Gabriel was supposed to deliver some message and I zoomed past it? (If so, maybe slowing it down there could've helped.

But overall, I enjoyed it. It was a fun, short read as promised.

Still thanks for the time and playing it!

Story is probably my bigger focus next time around.