Jus, wow, what a gripping and engaging story. It takes a little while to really get going, but when it does, you’re hooked! The only real problem I’ve got with the story is that we don’t get to see Carter prechange enough, I feel. Maybe an additional flashback scene just before Hartman starts really suspecting things would have helped.
The visual style is very distinct but you get used to it. It doesn’t seem to have any big meaning, but it works. And it’s used extremely well. The little animations and all enhance the story really well.
The music fits well, and the sound effects, notably during the hypnosis tape, really immerse you.
Although, I’m wondering about the text speed. It seems designed to be played with non-infinite cps, but the default is infinite. Probably should change that. There are a few times where the wrong name is displayed, and Carter’s big snake is missing at least once.
Overall, my new Novembuck favourite. MR BIG really uses text, visuals and audio in perfect communion. Hard to imagine this is the author’s first VN. Impressive work!