I love this (already told friends all about this, lol). I'm just like others girls fr, Florian has my heart. But let me tell you, I would pay to date Kael too c: (maybeeeeeeee a future dlc? hehehe :3)
one minor thing to add: maybe you can try/test if the text is easier to read/easier to follow when the words appear one after the other and not a whole block of text at once? I had some really minor "issues" with this bc the reading didn't feel as smooth as it could have been :)
