I am HEAVILY biased but the backgrounds are fantastic, I really liked the limited palette
there's a visceral undreamline quality to them, especially when accopanied by the droning of the background music
I'm not active at all in the ABO space, I think this is the first omegaversefic I ever read in full actually, so often the abo stuff around pheromones and claiming felt like a layer of scaffolding that wouldn't have been needed to support the story, but it's not actually something negative to me, take it more like an oursider's perspective hehe
some more feedback and critique I wrote down:
a general typographic hint: centered text is generally a bit more taxing on the eyes to read than left-bound text because the eyes have to readjust to find the new beginning of the sentence every time, instead of having one common rest position. maybe this was intentional, and it wasn't a huge issue, but a small thing I just wanted to mention
the pacing was good! a very minor point was that as the first words left alpha's voice I would've wished we got description of her tone thne, instead of a few lines later. The reveal of omega behind alpha was really well done, imo it could've cut alpha's words even short unexpectedly hehe, but yeah, genuinely really good reveal as a first CG especially
the hand degloving scene was harrowing and I loved it so much. great level of intensity and fucked-up-ness!! Alpha's toxicity and self-righteousness is horrid and disgusting and she's such a good character for it. fuck her for real, Omega deserved better-
enjoyable read over all, was the first thing to catch my eyes when I looked at the submissions as they started coming in a few weeks ago :3