Interesting concept! The story moved along at a fast pace, so I didn't fully understand the plot. There's no indication as to what objects can be interacted with. Maybe you can add a highlight or outline that appears when you hover over objects that can be clicked.
There were many spelling errors. Almost every sentence had at least one. You should find an English speaker or some software that can help you proofread.
I'm not sure about this as a visual novel, but with your passion for art, I think this could make a great webcomic!