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An interesting enemies to lovers romance novel with a great concept... But a lacking execution.  I really liked the use of sprites and the two main characters. Sadly I feel like the music was misused in multiple instances, for example during a heart to heart battle music was playing spoiling the external conflict that was about to happen. Another issue I had was with the abuse of the "Some time later" screen, in multiple cases this screen could've been replaced with one or two lines that could've made the transition between scenes more smooth. Finally my main issue stands with the redemption of the conqueror, the story would've greatly benefited from showing Stag's redemption through some actions instead of words alone. The redemption also felt really rushed considering the proportion to what the character has done. Despite this I see a lot of potential in this story and team. I hope the team had a lot of fun working on this and that it will keep creating art in the future!!!

TASTE RATING: "Tastes like bread"