'Remnants of Nostalgic Fantasies' is a bit of a think piece/slice of life/blog-post about the mundane-ness of adult life and the longing for simpler times. It's a cute little story about coming home from work to your 'platonic' deer roommate and you guys play an old school NES game together. You get a couple of nice facts about Nintendo games, and some cute animations of the deer man bouncing around as he sets the table. Samel is also really well characterized, being passionate about tech and wanting to be your bestie. It's quite relatable, and a pleasant read through. When you work on your next VN, I feel you could challenge yourself more when it comes to the story. You've got the internal monologues and the atmospheric setting descriptions down, feel free to start having fun throwing in some interesting conflicts and plot structures, maybe even lengthening your story to have full on character arcs. You've got the fundamentals down, start having fun and experimenting.