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The novel seems to have a clear objective at first glance, something as simple as a quest, but as it progresses, it also adds a message to the reader about hatred and negative comments.

This is a very good message, and I was able to understand the reason for the game's title, but due to its short length and the sudden change of scenery just to convey the message at the end, it probably doesn't completely convince the reader, especially since the screen time for each character hasn't been used effectively, as the story is usually narrated from the protagonist's point of view, but however, the intention is still clear.

I would recommend expanding and refining the introductory setting, as I was somewhat confused about how the plot began, I don't know if this is due to my limited English. (since I thought I was in the lizard's shoes, but in the end, I realized I was the cat witch)

I also see a great effort, especially with the interface you've presented.

Because it looks disruptive, and I love it.

Although it could be improved for Android, as the text can be somewhat difficult to read there. Good job!