'First Winds' (ididntknowhowmightythewindsweretonight) is something that I would describe as a sensory experience about living in the life of a current generation alt emo college student. I really dig these kinds of visual novels that are inspired by a genre of music, and with a genre as chaotic and unabashedly detached from adhering to convention as screamo, the nearly indecipherable font choices with the overuse of new-gen slang and involuntary text box changes seem to embody that style. The art style is also just really emotive, messy and raw, and I dig that for this project. The plot and characters of this story live in the moment, and don't seem to concern themselves with things like pacing, plot structure, or any kind of proper set up. That being said, it does mean that this story is just a slice-of-life with no real direction or plot movement. I can only assume that the goal of this VN was to eventually get into a romance with the deer with a strong chin, doing a classic "friends to lovers" plot, but since this VN only gets about 1/3rd the way in, I don't really know just how that would've played out.
Some tips that could be used if you finish this VN or go on to make other VNs. Give your characters different color name tags, so even if they are difficult to read with the font, they're still visually distinguishable via just a color. When crafting your narrative, especially with limited time, ya gotta do an outline to figure out which parts of your story are the major moments so can figure out how to get to them. While taking the time to write out the rapid fire conversation between your two characters is great to establish their relationship with each other, you tended to really over-indulge in it, and it became filler basically. While it's cool to have all the text be spoken through the character's voice, when you get to establishing setting and have more overview narration, you should probably have that be written out in a more plain spoken way. Makes it easier for readers and makes the dialog standout more, instead of it all blending together in slang and emojis. Overall, I think this has a great viewpoint and humor, keep working at it and focus a bit more on the fundamentals so your VN will have more meat on it's bones.