Well, it is official. I may be "chopped" (nothing new here), I am for sure not "Unc". I see, for the most part, where the vibe, and tone of this VN wants to go, and applaud the author for leaning into it. Fresh blood for the VN gods and all. At times though the more meme/slang humor does bite itself in the ass and detracts from the overall work rather than capture the young adult spirit of the world. There are some issues with establishing facts or even really knowing what parts are important or will be important. I did very much get swept up in this brief look into a young adult adventure with great music. I am a sucker for Midwest Emo, after all. I just think this work needs some idea bounced off others and refined before too soon.