I am not finding very much to fix. I still haven't finished the document. I was reading the Adventure Reveal more closely and I am still struggling with the Clarify the Text Move and when to use it and how to apply the results. But that is probably just me. I did notice a spacing error in the Clarify the Text Move box between Strong Hit and Weak Hit.
Thanks! I can’t wait to see. You have a really great supplement here! So imaginative and useful. The only other “big” thing you should consider is creating a more detailed TOC. There is sooo much detail in here that it would be nice to have a detailed list of everything in order to find it quickly. Even though it is already organized nicely, it will be easy to forget all that is contained in this tome. Consider it.