'Heaven' is a tense and eerie psychological horror with a dash of a family drama story. The presentation is top notch, and it's just goes to show how even with the pre-made sprites and a bunch of common use visual and audio assets can come together to really bring an experience to life. I'd say that's probably one of the great skills I've seen from burlapjoe, just his ability to pull all these assets from different places and put it together in a real cinematic fashion. The story this time around is also way more tight and focused, getting right into this mystery with the main character's mental issue and then catapulting into a religious horror that is visiting your boyfriend's religious parents and all the awkward tension that comes with a culture that preaches love and acceptance on one hand while condemning and shunning with the other. Incorporate a plot element of a long missing brother and weird hallucinations from an old retro game, and then an eerie underlying presence that emerges at the climax before the "to be continued" card, and you have a wildly compelling and crazy immersive visual novel. There's very little to easily critique in this one. There's a little bit of confusion early on when figuring out which one was Theo or Bailey (cause Bailey's sprite really makes you think he's the construction guy), but I caught on eventually. The transitions are great in keeping the pace moving, and cutting off scenes before they drag on too long. Plus, it's weirdly grounded in that all familiar queer storytelling of living in-between accepted and out, and keeping it to yourself to not draw negative attention (the church scene is just so accurate). This one's one of those game jam VNs that you wish the rules could be bent to let it be finished, but it's still a great read in this cut off state. Looking forward to the finished version.