I enjoyed this experience; investigation stories are always intriguing and keep you hooked, and this one was no exception, with nice and immersive writing. As a bit of constructive feedback, I could suggest adding more variables to check if certain events have already happened, since on several occasions you end up in loops that take you back to the same scene. This breaks the flow and shatters the 'invisible box' that a video game or interactive fiction is in this case. Beyond that, I really enjoyed the experience and had a fun time solving this case—just another day in the life of Bailey.