That was pretty fun. The characters and their interactions are great! There are a few typos or grammar weirdness and some repetition, but the writing is overall pretty good. I really liked the scenes in the store and home, but the sex at the end didn’t really catch my attention. Oh well. The one with Dorian not having CGs made it a bit boring visually, but that’s a Game Jam for ya.
Speaking of visuals, the sprites were nice and the backgrounds work. Funnily, Clara’s living room is the photo we used as a reference for my main character’s home in For the Love of Robots. Quite the coincidence! (We can’t say it’s the same home though, that wouldn’t make sense^^) I really liked when the sprites peeked from outside the screen, quite funny! The music was pretty good as well!
Overall, quite good! Although, Clara didn’t do any sex witchery…