pretty and heart-wrenching :'3 though, I think the story can be made to be more impactful still, if the writing were improved. there are a lot of things I'm still confused with, like what actually happened while Ethan was in coma, and why Renee was there with him in the "black box" (or why she has to be there at all, what's her role in the story exactly...) but I gotta admit that scene where Ethan was spiraling down in the black room was discomforting, what with there's lack of anything on the screen but black bg - which means you've done good job on that part uwu)b