pretty and heart-wrenching :'3 though, I think the story can be made to be more impactful still, if the writing were improved. there are a lot of things I'm still confused with, like what actually happened while Ethan was in coma, and why Renee was there with him in the "black box" (or why she has to be there at all, what's her role in the story exactly...) but I gotta admit that scene where Ethan was spiraling down in the black room was discomforting, what with there's lack of anything on the screen but black bg - which means you've done good job on that part uwu)b
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Thank you for enjoying this little story! Actually, I want to flesh out more stories about Ethan's life before the coma. Alas, the time was ticking. Renee was absolutely a mysterious girl... I liked to leave as it is, but I think I need to show her more... she deserves more screen time XD I am glad that the black room scene was discomforting, the premise of this story revolved around this room after all <3 (also less bg to use, my strategy to use remaining jam time efficiently lol).