If the previous version is good, this one is awesome, you really expand it, giving details to the scene now MC's background is more clearer, they're Prince/Princess of Heavenly Empire, previously I only get the impression that MC in previous version is heir to the great cultivator house in immortal realm, now I am getting chills on how influential their original family is, the forest scene also expanded, I like the addition of mundane things like handfishing I mean we're playing child here even if they're crazy powerful child there should be time for play and fun things. Not just cultivating and being serious all the time.
I like that you also expand more on Ji Jian now she doesn't feel like in previous version forgettable extra character, now I have reason to pick Ji Ji as my first word instead of Ru Ru beside trying to tease Ruolan, I think having a chance to develop bonds with foster family is great addition to this story.
I think the pacing still good, you manage to balance the expansion from being too lore dumpy but still pretty descriptive.