I think my only fault with this VN is how short it is. I think a longer script with more room to breath and let the ideas and dialogue come out more naturally would have lended to a better story. I like a lot of what you have here. The anxious father from a trans man's perspective is great. Love it. Just needs more time to let the ideas you have on this subject to be done naturally.
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Hi! I am the editor.
After taking a look at the prototype script I figured I could write some breather text so the moments of highest action in the fvn aren't so close to each other, but I was running out of time and gocused on the sprites I still had to do.
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