Some of those designs are actually cracks on her body. Also you have drawn her vagina which can't shown on game card.
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Oh they are cracks? I thought they were pieces of her armor, damn. Do I take them off or keep them like this? I figured the cracks were the lines more straight. If you want I can take the lines off. And her vagina, shit, didn't know it was that xD I will cover it up right now and make it a whole hip piece.
Is her chest number okay? B-502? On her leg I guessed it was Riku written in hirgana.
If you want me to change any of the pieces of her body that are cracks and shouldn't be there please let me know.
PD: For Reiko do you want her hair braided or long and loose?