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I wish there was a creativity category in this jam because you would certainly have the highest score of anyone in this jam in my opinion. I love how you stepped out of the box and applied the theme from several different approaches. I will be using the uniqueness category to convey these thoughts and you have full points from me there. Your production is really strong and the composition also is a really nice blend of several widely varied types of instruments that you make sound quite natural together. I think my one thought giving me pause on this track is the melody instrument that emerges at 2:18. It sounds quite thin, and while you help remedy this somewhat by having a swaying panning automation, as the orchestra builds really big around it it feels like it should be growing as well. Maybe that can be accomplished with slowly stopping the swaying and keeping it centered with a crescendo, or maybe it can be doubled by a wider instrument? In any case, I don’t think that it detracts from the beauty of this piece. I enjoyed it and would be quite at ease hearing this in a game. Great work and thank you for sharing!

Creativity is "Overall Uniqueness." I think I'm going to change this to "Originality" in future jams, as I want to capture both creativity in smaller and larger contexts.

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Okay that's good that my interpretation matches this. I gave 5 stars for uniqueness! I think that would be a good change for clarification and to encompass all of what you are trying to capture.