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Thanks, Tim! Do you think I could be more explicit with the choices and payoffs for the ending? 

Damn it lmao I thought I caught the Millow/Willow switch ups. My brain subconsciously switched to Willow while I was writing. I’ll make fixes after the entry has been judged in the SIG Arcjam. 

Thanks!

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It's hard to say how you'd go about making it super explicit without making it lose some charm... and you can't go all expo-mode with walls of lore up front, so I suppose it was ok as is .. but maybe some of the questions left me wondering if I did the "right" thing or not (like imprisoning the sister.) 

Also congrats on your reasonable playthrough (once) time! I fear ours is like wayyyy too long for folks and they will not see the endings. T-T