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I don't know what indivi has planned for the future, but I had an idea and wanted to share it. I really like Lin Lin, and that's why I feel she needs more lore. For that reason, I think it would be great if, at a certain point late in the game, after facing the succubus queen, Polkopola's challenge, and finishing Gin's route, when you go to the massage parlor, you see Lin Lin looking somewhat upset, talking to a relative or acquaintance. Being the nosy person you are, you hide to listen to the conversation. The person tells Lin Lin that she must return home because it is being affected by an epidemic that causes people to fall asleep and be unable to wake up. and since no one knows what to do, he went to look for Lin Lin. She realizes that Lust is listening to them and makes her leave. In an exchange of words, Lust offers to accompany them to help. Lin Lin accepts because she knows that Lust is strong (you must have defeated her blind, naked, and without limbs). This would unlock a new snowy mountain area. Upon arrival, we would discover that Lin Lin is a kind of princess, although not the heiress (otherwise she would not have been able to leave the mountain), and that Lin Lin's parents and siblings are already infected. I think it would be good to learn a passive skill trained here, such as with a martial arts master who offers to train Lust Doll when he sees her abilities. Investigating the epidemic, they would notice that all The clues or traces indicate that this has a magical origin and lead to a place deep inside a cave that seems to have something similar to a seal that Lust feels is damaged. (To reach the seal, they must solve some puzzles that are in the cave.) They decide to retreat because they don't understand anything, However, if Lust's intelligence is high, he will be able to decipher some of the engravings on the seal, which talk about a guy we'll call Eh. Poe wanted to be very powerful and perfect, and to achieve this, he made a sacrifice and paid a high price. Some parts are blank or illegible, and in the end, it says that Poe is a hero who saved everyone and “sealed it.” Faced with this revelation, Lin Lin comments that Poe is one of her ancestors. Then, at Lin Lin's house, the story will ask you to go to sleep, and when you do, you will be awakened in the middle of the night by a silhouette that you decide to follow. and it heads to the cave. By the time you realize it is Lin Lin, it is too late, and she touches the seal, destroying it. A bunch of shadows come out of it, and finally a large shadow with a physical form emerges, but you ignore it. You run to see how Lin Lin is, and she wakes up with difficulty and does not remember anything. You try to return to the village with Lin Lin on your back, but on the way, some shadows intercept you and want to kill Lin Lin. You fight against them them, but at a certain point they catch you off guard and manage to get close to Lin Lin (who is very weak and unable to defend herself), But at that moment, Gin arrives and destroys them (why? Because he can, and because I want him to). He looks bigger, more mature, and stronger, and without saying a word, he joins you in the fight. After defeating the shadows, there is an emotional reunion between Lust and Gin, where he says that he has traveled to many places and came to the mountains to train. when out of nowhere he saw a hurricane of shadows and Lust Doll. They exchange kind words and Gin decides to join Lust to stop this. Things happen (I'm not that creative) and they arrive at the throne room where that shadow with a physical body is sitting on the throne, having done who knows what to Lin Lin's parents and siblings. At that moment, through the shadow's dialogue, Lust Doll understands everything and tells Lin Lin that she must fight that shadow since only she can stop it. In the end, Gin and Lust decide to weaken the shadow so that the weak Lin Lin can deliver the coup de grâce. After the fight, Lin Lin approaches the shadow and absorbs it, then Lust Doll explains that in order for Poe to be perfect, he made a pact with some kind of being super powerful to remove all the flaws from Poe's body and soul, but since this being was a wretch, he let Poe's flaws in the form of a shadow roam free. The shadow began to steal people's shadows and their vital energy, until Poe sealed it in the cave. but over time, the seal weakened and it began to steal the energy of sleeping people, preventing them from waking up. Lin Lin was able to absorb it because she was a direct descendant of Poe, and that is why the shadow entered her dreams so that she would break the seal. That is also why the shadows wanted to kill her. With the defeat of the shadow, everyone wakes up and Lin Lin gains new powers (why? Because yes). Despite everything, Lin Lin decides to return with you, because the slums are her home. In this adventure, things happened that I don't know what they will be, but it also made me love Lust Doll more. Gen says he wants to continue traveling to become stronger and that's why he won't return with Lust. But from here on out, it will be possible to see Gin in random locations, where when you talk to him, he will tell you what he thinks of the place or share an anecdote. In addition to being able to do H things with him, from now on we will also be able to invite Lin Lin to the private dungeon, and she will be available on the island. THE END. After all this text, I'm sure this will never happen, but thank you for reading, and sorry for my English.

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Excuse me, what the actual fudge- 

This is AMAZING. It's actually an awesome storyline for lin lin

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It's a pretty interesting story, although maybe lacking lewds haha. Make sure to use paragraphs to make your writing easier to read!

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HOLY FUCK! thats quite the story. Really creative. 10/10