Ahhh nice, i enjoyed reading the story so far. You're doing a nice job for this Demo, if you planning to continuing this vn I'll definitely looking forward for more updates!!!
And here's what i thought about this vn. Your character and their background are really well written imo, I'm not really familiar with D&D stuff, so i kinda not really focused on those part(even though it was the main plot lol) but the interaction between MC and their friends is nice, that's more interesting for me. And the last part? What's that all about? Did the MC get isekai-ed or something? And if so, then does that mean this game gonna be more fantasy in the future later? Alright that's all for now, thanks!!