Congrats on submitting, and good job on the narrative!! It felt incredibly intimate to catch the glimpse into your life, and I really related with the content. Especially the multiple rejections. The visual aids were also a really nice touch, it helped immerse me in this pocket of your world.
Some things I picked up:
I think the path to the orange juice is broken, since I had no way to get back to the main story after picking that option.
Knowing you planned time consumed and alcohol consumed mechanics, I'm pretty bummed I couldn't experience that too! But I know time (and life) gets in the way!
Good job! Looking forward to seeing more of your works ^^
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Thanks so much!
I had to fix a connector with the beer just before submitting to the game jam, but looking at the file now I'm not seeing anywhere that "breaks" on the path from Orange Juice back to the Fridge. I did however notice that I forgot to add the label "Return to Home Office" from grabbing the Orange juice from there, which may have caused some problem just with visibility that you could click it.
So that's fixed for the next build after the jam, thanks for pointing it out! (If I've missed anything, of course, let me know!)